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Lisa and a rat by Keiton Lisa and a rat by Keiton
Animesh Lisa Simpson looking at a rat which sits in a kind of terrarium. It's a WiP, so i either finish it or move it to scraps. Who knows.

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Took the pieces of advice by Gekster [link] , many thanxes to her, into account and added some more details.
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DandiX Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
realmente lindo
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Keiton Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Me alegro, gracias ; )
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psyAlera Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008  Student Digital Artist
Looks really nice!The rat is cute!!!
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:D
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campervan Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2008
wonderful! I like how the hands are pushed onto the glass and the perspective!
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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jonjon13 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008
Sweet style man!
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:iconkeiton:
Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx, dude :D
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Cardboardgrace Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008
Awwwwwww this is very adorable! I love her expression and what's going on!
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 14, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THanx, and thanx for favin, too :)
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bolsterstone Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008   General Artist
There's a nice flow to the piece. Obviously the Gekster comments helped. I'll be stopping by in about a month or so to see how your style has developed. Looks very promising. ;-)
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:iconkeiton:
Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you.
You are always welcome to pay me a visit and have a look, i will do my best in developing my skills :)
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KwongBee-Arts Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
well i can't compeate with that top that critique but over all i think this is a very cute piece
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:iconkeiton:
Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you :)
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Gekster Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008
Ok, lets see!
First , try to clean out the lines a bit. Have them look consistent through out the body! The use of a coloured instead of black lines actually adds to that more ';poster like' feel, which is good. Keep that!

On the hand that is up closest I suggest you try to make ';pressure' prints. You know how the hand flattens when you press it against the surface? That effect would give depth to the picture perfectly!

The eye possition and gaze leads to the rat properly so all good on that! Can't comment yet on the rat as it's a wip, right? But looking forward to the finished one when completed. As for the terrarium. Something keeps bothering me with that one. Maybe try making the glassy shine on it and try making the angle less steep! Also a place where it will be sitting needs to be added for certain!!!

Oh lastly on the head. Right now the dark rounded looks to flatten the head. Try to add some highlights that will make it rounder, more 3D!

In all, looks very promising and if you can please notify me when you've got the completed version! I'd love to see it!
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you for your kindness.
I have tweaked it a bit according to your tipps, and i surely will continue, and inform you when it is done.
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Gekster Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2008
Not a problem and agreed! :) Looking forward to seeing the end result!
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xtrmgamer Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
I like her expression ^^
Nicely drawn =D
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanx :D
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xtrmgamer Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008
you're welcome =D
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ladyglass Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Artist
Her expression is the best!
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
-^^-
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Ahsayuni-Love Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
omg awesome even though it's a wip i like the coloring (er?) and her expression :3
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you -^__^-
Coloring(er)?
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Ahsayuni-Love Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2008
XD ah well i put (er?) when i think i say something weird or totally out of.. topic or concept or.. (that word that i can't think of DX)
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Keiton Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2008  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aha. Weirdo.

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